Open Poetry #15 |
Three Wishes |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
One, to be snug in a washtub happy as a little flower listening to mama sing Jesus loves the little children, all the children of the world... Two, to see my grandma smile once more see the wisdom in those merry eyes never remembering her last goodbye Three, to give love with all my heart, mind, and soul ~*~ BloomingRose |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful wishes, very touching |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sweet poem and I hope your last wish, at least, comes true. Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- What lovely wishes these are.. You've penned them beautifully. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading of your three wishes...James |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sea~ Of the 3 I would wish for the last as #1. It's not always easy to love with all that we have inside. *sigh* Thanks for the nice comment. Trill~ Thank you, and yes it is my desire to be able to be like that. At least most of the time. Vicky~ Thanks *hugs* James~ Thank you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would say that your path to will lead you to your wishes especially number three. Wonderful wishes my friend. Nice to see one of yours here today on my return. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely wishes. Nicely written. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This moved me...very much! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nicely written, beautiful wishes, touched. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- And you do...everyday.. *bump* hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
With the first two thoughts and memories as your base, I trust you should do well at the third, challenging as it may be . . . and more rewarding to be received than to receive. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all so much for kind words. Sending warm wishes of happiness to all. Deb |
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