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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-07-20 10:57 PM


One,
to be snug in a washtub
happy as a little flower
listening to mama sing

Jesus loves the little children,
all the children of the world
...
Two,
to see my grandma smile once more
see the wisdom in those merry eyes
never remembering her last goodbye
Three,
to give love
with all my heart, mind, and soul

~*~

BloomingRose


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1 posted 2001-07-20 11:04 PM


beautiful wishes, very touching  
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2 posted 2001-07-20 11:20 PM


Sweet poem and I hope your last wish, at least, comes true.

Betty Lou Hebert

vlraynes
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3 posted 2001-07-21 01:24 AM



Deb-
   What lovely wishes these are..
   You've penned them beautifully.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-07-21 04:31 AM


I enjoyed reading of your three wishes...James
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2001-07-21 03:03 PM


Sea~ Of the 3 I would wish for the last as #1. It's not always easy to love with all that we have inside. *sigh* Thanks for the nice comment.

Trill~ Thank you, and yes it is my desire to be able to be like that. At least most of the time.


Vicky~ Thanks *hugs*

James~ Thank you  

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2001-07-22 11:47 AM


I would say that your path to will lead you to your wishes especially number three.  Wonderful wishes my friend.  Nice to see one of yours here today on my return.
Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-07-22 12:35 PM


Lovely wishes.  Nicely written.
Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-07-22 12:52 PM


This moved me...very much!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


shadow974
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9 posted 2001-07-22 02:19 PM


Nicely written, beautiful wishes,  touched.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

vlraynes
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10 posted 2001-09-01 11:21 PM



Deb-
   And you do...everyday..
   *bump*

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Krawdad
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11 posted 2001-09-03 11:12 PM


With the first two thoughts and memories as your base, I trust you should do well at the third, challenging as it may be . . . and more rewarding to be received than to receive.
BloomingRose
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12 posted 2001-09-04 10:46 AM


Thank you all so much for kind words.
Sending warm wishes of happiness to all.

Deb

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