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Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2001-09-01 01:50 PM

Tangled in the grip of circumstance
Hidden from the view of the sun's rays
Refusing to give what I love a second glance
Caught within the steady swell of days

I forgot a place where thoughts are born.
A place that understands
not through actions, but words.
To this place my heart is sworn.

I come here again this time to stay
Returning to a home of friends from
which I should have never gone away
There is a poem out there which calls my name
and this is how i pray it to always remain..

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-09-01 02:57 PM

Jenny, this is a VERY strong poem with a lot of depth -- one of those that with each re-read sinks in a little deeper. You've got one here I hope many have the opportunity to read, re-read, and contemplate. Great work!

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-09-01 03:09 PM

fantastic writing, jenny! enjoyed very much!

*smiles*

~Tier

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-09-01 03:42 PM

Jenny, I read and re-read....and I will read it again as it is very...very strong and beautiful.

Tread to my library

Charisma

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-01 04:45 PM

VoiceLess~
Isn't it comforting to know that they leave a light on ?

So glad to see you're home to stay~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2001-09-01 07:23 PM

"There is a poem out there which calls my name
and this is how i pray it to always remain.."

this is just beautiful...helen

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

6 posted 2001-09-01 11:26 PM

Hey,
Thanks you guys.
It is always good to be back
and to be able to read some great poems!
Thanks for the posts I am happy
you enjoyed it!

~Jenny

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

7 posted 2001-09-02 12:44 PM

Hi Jenny,

I am so glad I came looking for one of your poems cause this is awesome and forsure a keeper, wow I just love it, thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-09-04 08:03 AM

I forgot a place where thoughts are born.
A place that understands
not through actions, but words.
To this place my heart is sworn.
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There is a poem out there which calls my name
and this is how i pray it to always remain..
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This is a wonderful exploration of a poets mind...and a very cool poem.
yes...the poetry is always inside us waiting to be given a voice....
Welcome back poetess ... so great that you found your voice again

jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

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