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Haiku "Poetry" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Poetry Poetry's flowers Always suckle the odor Of awesome lonesome. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting poem Seymour... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you know how much I like Haiku/Senryu/Tanka and I like this piece. I will have to ponder this, though. Between you and Ron, my navel gets a thorough examination quite often  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eden in your mind a verdant garden blossoms butterflies fly free  only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, this certainly is interesting and a ponderer or a piece, for certain |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I applaud you sir In total admiration Sums up my thoughts too~ *You rock big time ! What a crafty summation~ Love ya'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thanks for the read. Interloper, LOL that is good. JM, My butterflies fly Around the ghosts of this host In fantasy land Love ya. Sy VAS, Ponder away and thanks. Marge, Your perception is beautiful. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, Sy, I would have to agree with you! Very well expressed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
pretty hummingbird favorite of poet's song sips sweetly and deep |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the comment and agree. Sunshine, Nice one *L* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful words Seymour. Passion's Poetry Blossom of unknown feelings Enriches our mind Thanks, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful Haiku. Enjoyed the read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
bouquet of flowers woven with poets passion spreads odour of love Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Very nice, thank you. Poeminister, Thanks for the comp. Chadisma, Excellent, thank you. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
awesome lonesome? interesting concept? will think more about it. thank you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nice, Sy. Inspires me to try one... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Poetry is all A landscape of painted words A portrait of life |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I could read this all day. In just a few words, you've said so much. I'm too well acquainted with "awesome lonesome" and would shake it readily if I could - but it is what draws me to poetry. Beautiful work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, It is something to think about. Mark, It can be fun Nan, You understand and write very well. *L* Illusion, Enjoy the poetry. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
back for another read...awesome lonesome..i tell you i will remember this phrase for a long time to come |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
You have summed it up perfectly...and with such poetic ease! I am sure you have no trouble suckling the odor of your own awesome lonesome.~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Faust New Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 7 |
Well, I just wanted to say I agree with all above, this is a nicely done Haiku, and truly does capture the essence of "poetry". Enjoyed very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Faterider, A flattering comment, thank you once again. Smitten, No trouble with the odor just writing the words. Thank you. |
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