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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

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Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-07-31 07:05 PM

There is no one here.
In a world self made
I revel and simply refuse to wither.
Despite an unsettling mood of storms
settling over my soul
I revel and adamantly refuse to wither.
Although there is rain,
although my smile is frowning,
And the days seem to get longer without you,
I am still refusing the wither of sadness.
Although there is a certain feel of regret,
for every knowing you and your love,
I refuse to wither and loose my passionate coloring.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2001-07-31 07:06 PM

that's the way that it should be. . .

speaking from the depths with this one. . . well done. . .

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Logan
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2 posted 2001-07-31 08:06 PM

Ahh, the steel bar of strength in the gentle one..you know I approve..nicely done..very gentle smile

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3 posted 2001-08-01 12:20 PM

Just great writing in this one.

~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~
~* Mysteria *~

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Member Rara Avis

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-08-02 10:10 AM

Good for you. Write on.

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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-02 10:14 AM

Temptress,
I'm with you, Enjoyed.

Professor Gloom
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of Depression

6 posted 2001-08-02 02:24 PM

Nicely done,
never allow yourself to wither,
always to yourself gather.
Hold onto emotions tightly
least they escape from you.

Gloom

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7 posted 2001-08-03 01:09 AM

I don't think you could lose your passionate coloring, my friend. Very nice work here.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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Member Seraphic

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2001-08-03 02:07 PM

"I revel and adamantly refuse to wither"
KEWL...

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