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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-08-03 08:14 AM

I sit upon a sunbathed rock
In my life I slowly take stock
As the waves surround my feet
Where man and nature finally meet

The water serves to soothe my soul
Allowing me to once again be whole
For my sins have all been washed clean
My life has been painted with new scenes

No longer do I walk alone in the dark
Looking for that ever elusive spark
The light of life surrounds me now
To the heavens I reverently bow

Peace surrounds my troubled heart
Giving me a brand new start
Walking in victory with my Lord
To new heights my life has soared

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-03 08:22 AM

finding peace is always a victory... I enjoyed...very nicely done1

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-08-03 09:17 AM

Such encouraging words for the rest of us to keep looking to the heavens! This one does soar! Enjoyed.
Sincerely,
Regina

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

3 posted 2001-08-03 10:30 AM

I've always found a sense of renewal and peace from visits to the sea - even if those feelings are so fleeting they seem borrowed.

But you've found a greater source of peace and lasting victory, and written it well. Beautiful work.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-08-03 11:43 AM

Then this explains the warm behind the words....well done!

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-03-2001).]

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

5 posted 2001-08-03 01:31 PM

Excellent! This describes the way I should be feeling. Your words bring me closer. Thank you.

ShannonM

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-08-03 01:45 PM

Jesus had good reason to say "Peace be with you" He knew it's an emotion we crave. God bless you!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

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