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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Somewhere Somewhere in the depth of spaces Raveled in a century’s twine There’s a thread of gold that laces Through the story that is mine Every past has been repeated Every future has been lived Only through the deeds completed Is one’s image finely sieved Through a mirror brightly painted Portrait of a life is spread Intertwined among the tainted Is a fragile golden thread Only I can know the sorrow Only I can feel the bliss Only love can weave tomorrow’s Golden threads of reminisce Wrapped in senses of belonging In the spaces of the blue On the mystic edge of longing Lies a dream that can come true In the width and breadth of time A million teardrops have been shed Within the story that is mine There runs a gleaming golden thread Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-19-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading your poem Elizabeth...James |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nicely written, I enjoyed!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... the history woven on threads of past and future.. Very good!! I enjoyed!!! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wrapped in senses of belonging In the spaces of the blue On the mystic edge of longing Lies a dream that can come true In the width and breadth of time A million teardrops have been shed Within the story that is mine There runs a gleaming golden thread ================================ Beautiful magical piece.....with a touch of traveling through time..... Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I really appreciated this one, Elizabeth, and the fine way it has been written and worked. Thank you for sharing this with us! "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and such a beautiful tapestry that golden thread could produce...excellent, Liz..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The meter and tempo are perfect Lady Santos...a singsong quality melded with a love's story that any two would want to have grace their lives... Absolutely wonderful, and a keeper.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ 'Only love can weave tomorrow’s Golden threads of reminisce' A beautiful truth~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, When I read your poetry it feels like you are inside me. Sy |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Elizabeth: Another beautiful, insightful piece! Betty Lou Hebert |
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