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Acknowledgment
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Acknowledgment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Acknowledgment There is no sound as quite profound As those that emanate the ground And with the lie are those that fly Upon the wind in whispered sigh For they are music to my ears And play my symphony of years And they are vision to my eyes Providing goals of realize. They fill me with a sense of real A place to launch my souls ideal A place to shape the burr of late A place to hold the hand of fate There is no sense that stirs me more Than Eden and its open door The options of the filigree The passage of eternity The music plays to countless throng And each one hears a different song. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
But what a chorus you provide, our Sy....this is absolutely beautiful, and I would like to see this, your Eden... it holds many things encompassed 'pon butterflies wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Your Eden surounds you. *L* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nice Seymour. you continue to impress and amaze me with your words. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
What a beautiful song I hear from this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no sound as quite profound As those that emanate the ground And with the lie are those that fly Upon the wind in whispered sigh ======================= And they are vision to my eyes Providing goals of realize. ======================== A place to launch my souls ideal ================ A place to hold the hand of fate There is no sense that stirs me more Than Eden and its open door The options of the filigree The passage of eternity The music plays to countless throng And each one hears a different song. ============================ your poetry is the music to my ears!!! Sy this is so beautiful... what a wonderful, lovely, spiritual, soulful write... you take us to the Eden in your mind and the gift of endless treasures is ours to find. (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)   me~Edens Door~     |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Tabin: A very fine read... Thanks for sharing. Peace! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Nice response, thank you. Into2B, Thank you for listening. JM, OhhowIlovewhenyouanswerlikethis. Winkiewinkie Stinky Andrew, A fine comment, thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Such treasures I find in thoughts from your mind~ 'The options of the filigree The passage of eternity The music plays to countless throng And each one hears a different song.' You play the music with an original composition~ Play on Maestro ! *Hugs*~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
These two lines grabbed my attention: The music plays to countless throng And each one hears a different song. Very true, both literally and metaphorically. Such is the subjective nature of one's art... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written, Seymour. I wonder if we each have our own heaven. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I like what you hear beacause it comes out in the music of your poetry. Exquisite, my friend Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I hear your music, huggs and kisses. Mark, Wonderful comment. Shadow, Yes we do thank you. Elizabeth, I could ask for no greater praise. Sy |
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