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A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

0 posted 2001-07-18 09:56 PM

This stillness is void of sound
only the echo of memories remain

Who was it that stood in this silence
what thoughts transpired
shall they remember
when the darkness surrounds
when the wind whispers
their name

In a dance of chance
shall they meet again
in
swirling vapors of mist
illusions
as mystical as smoke
as life itself is

Yet, for one brief moment
in eternity, a minute span
in a distant reality
They touched, the souls smiled
in recognition, as ancient eyes
beheld a whiteness of truth

And they shall not, they can not
forget

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-07-18 10:03 PM

to Passions!

This is very well expressed - it made me think and reflect. I look forward to more poetry by you~

Take care,
Melissa~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-07-18 10:08 PM

What a lovely 'Tone of Voice' you have..
Wonderful entry post..enjoyed.

Welcome to our little circle of friends.
You're going to love it here.

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-18-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-07-18 10:33 PM

welcome and write on!

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-07-18 10:49 PM

Who was it that stood in this silence
what thoughts transpired
shall they remember
when the darkness surrounds
when the wind whispers
their name

In a dance of chance
shall they meet again
in
swirling vapors of mist
illusions
as mystical as smoke
as life itself is
=======================
this is lovely...mystic and dream like.
a creative, unique write...
welcome to Poetry Land, its so nice to have you here with us.
take care
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking
I passed that point long ago

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-07-18 11:05 PM

very lovely, mythical in feel

as if a vapor of time carries their relationship and keeps them bonded

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-07-19 07:55 AM

Hello! and Welcome to Passions! This is a lovely first entry into what we hope will become a poet's home of heart for your pen...

sit back, relax, read, post, and enjoy!

And check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

7 posted 2001-07-19 08:09 AM

Just a wonderful submission Tone of Voice.

softly assembled,
pleasantly presented
enchanting *s*

awww enjoy your work TOV
my best, SR

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

8 posted 2001-07-19 08:16 AM

Nicely written, welcome to passions.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-07-19 08:24 AM

Welcome to passions, and I truly enjoyed your beautiful entrance. Well done!

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-07-19 09:07 AM

Well I think your tone of voice is going to be appreciated a great deal on this end.

Very nicely done. Had to read it twice..once as I usually do, then a second time to slowly enjoy..

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

11 posted 2001-07-19 09:22 AM

Welcome...

hope you enjoy discovering passions...

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

12 posted 2001-07-19 05:50 PM

Welcome, nice write here. Hope you enjoy a long and happy stay here at Passions

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

13 posted 2001-07-19 05:53 PM

How magical!

Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post and I look forward to reading more!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

14 posted 2001-07-19 06:51 PM

Hauntingly appealing and waifting... Even visually becoming in form. A warm welcome to you, and kudos to a very nice write. I'll look for more from you.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

15 posted 2001-07-19 10:44 PM

Such a lovely Welcome Wagon, Thank you All so very much, I sincerely appreciate the kind words~! I think I just found me a wonderful place to be....*S* and, I do hope I didn't miss anyones's name....

Melissa Honeybee, Vlraynes, Irish Rose, Janet Marie, VAS, Sunshine, Shadowrider, Shadow974, Charisma, Cpat Hair, Severn,
Thunderkyss, SmittenKitten, MarkVSheldon!

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