Open Poetry #15 |
Catching The Wind |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Catching The Wind By: Noah Eaton 7/9/01 Spreading my wings, I confront the prism gale Colors of the wind passing through me, breathing easy We are all saints of the wind, born to perceive the voice of eternity The Wind is our valiant companion, like a child begging for your faith’s candy We’re all wolves within, hunters of clerisy Howling to the moon is but a solution to every nobleman masque Thirsting the light of reckoning, opening eyes to millions of new relatives The Wind is what attaches us living spirits together, man and spirits pact In catching the wind, one must hold ones ambition without restraint Welcoming the effects of change through the seasons, evaluating your chances Cracking the code of this enigmatic divinity with your own sense of judgment Comparing orchestrations with songbirds, comparing earthly melodies Our mean deviation is our own indecision Rapid eye movement envisioning multitudes of derivations To piece together these delaminated visions of wonder Building the greatest love from these words of the Wind They come and go, high and low Many within reach, others will be yours to achieve These many inspirations are shared to all the friends of the earth Piecing together the greatest hearts that we succeed to dream May we capture the wind, wherever it may blow Imagine all the many blessings you've already found Spread your wings and rise into His waft How does it feel this time around? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Our mean deviation is our own indecision Rapid eye movement envisioning multitudes of derivations To piece together these delaminated visions of wonder Building the greatest love from these words of the Wind Clever word play here Noah... I enjoyed!!! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I agree with Ron......a clever word play ....but there is also deep philosophy and powerful images.... I can almost hear the wind howling.... Thank you ************************ It's only me.......only me |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful write touching me. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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