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pooh
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 12
iowa usa

0 posted 2001-07-11 03:04 PM

well this is my very first poem on here be kind lol

Yearning For You

My ears long for the sweet whisper
of your enchanting voice.
I await for the day when your
lips unite with mine.
Moreover, when I can gaze into your eyes,
and see the cherished love.
To recieve the touch of your
intoxicating embrace.
To be in engulfed in your
majestic beauty.
In the absence of your love
days are long.
The darkness of the night is
unbearable alone.
Enduring the long hours, deprived of
your intimate touch,
Generates my love for you
to multiply even further.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-11 03:07 PM

Very nice!!! No need to worry about someone not being kind and gentle over this one, it's lovely!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-07-11 03:09 PM

Welcome to Passions! You will find much to read here, and many inspirational poets will be able to feed your muse any time you are in need of a kick-start! And, this was a delightful read! Thank you!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-11 03:25 PM

Darn it!! I don't get to kick you or anything??? This being nice stuff is for the birds.. ( laughing)

Liked the poem..and welcome!

WhiteDragon
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 70
O-town, Fl

4 posted 2001-07-11 04:12 PM

Very nice poem, and welcome! It's fun here

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-07-11 05:14 PM

very nice poetry first-timer..

and its true...the love often grows fonder when encountered with distance..

hope to see much more from you..glad youre joined us in the blue pages

hugs, g

so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind...
-tim mcgraw

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-07-11 05:41 PM

Oh Oh I just was kicking off the yearning and now you've me back to it

Welcome pooh (some relative of Winnie by chance?)

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-11-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-07-11 06:49 PM

Pooh....love it!

Great write.....looking forward to more

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-07-11 06:58 PM

Welcome to Passions and this is a very good start, you will find a lot of encouragement and support here as well as a critique forum, if you should want to go there! I hope you enjoy your stay here as much as I have.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-07-11 07:13 PM

This was a great first piece you have given us and I loved it. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care....Sue

Suetang

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-09-05 06:07 PM

Nice thoughts on love...James

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