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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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It is that time just before slumber When my eyelids become heavy My breathing becomes deep. It is that time I feel your hand gently touch the small of my back. It is that time our hearts together beat evenly as one. Sweet rest. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'd call it........ Love's Sweet Slumber...Very nice poem about the familiar warmth of togetherness and love! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh what a loving, peacefull scene I see hear. Very nice Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Nightshade! So gentle and loving. Must have been written with someone very very special in mind. Excellent write... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I am sure it was followed by sweet dreams.. Good Job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This one could get a fellas motor running.... Zoooooom, Zooooooooom Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks everyone!! Settle down Rusty.  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
In my expirence it was her ice cold feet.I was glad when she started wearing wool socks to sleep in.All kidding aside.I is so nice to be in bed with a warm soft body next to you.Good poem. paladin |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
That warm fuzzy moment.... just before passing through Dream's Gate. Yeah (sigh).. nice time and feeling. One of my favorites. You captured the image most nicely. Write on! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightShade~ Very softly sensual~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Very wonderful writings, I have many untitled poems, and sometimes I never find a title for them, doesn't matter, a poem will always be a poem, title or no... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou poets all. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Nightshade, welcome to Passions. What a lovely thought. Sweet dreams like that are worth cherishing. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Nightshade, this is quietly tender...thank you... |
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