Open Poetry #15 |
Sweet Flower of Friendship |
Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
A late night call His sweet voice Heart skips a beat In gentle rejoice I needed a hug After such a hard day His news cheered me up He is moving my way He is with me in spirit He tells me all the time Our bond is unbroken His heart is still mine I long so much His loving embrace to feel To melt in his arms Our true love to seal All in good time I softly remind my heart This friendship is budding The perfect place to start Dance like nobody is watching |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good place to start, Tanya, with friendship! Well done! |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Thank you Sunshine! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
A nice promising write! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful write. Best of luck to you both. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RaeOfSunshine~ What a lovely write of the heart. There is joy dangling from each thought. Such a lovely beginning. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Written from the heart, very nice. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sweet and beautiful poem. I like it! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Tanya- Ahhh...sweets, I'm smiling SOOOO BIG for you right now! I can just feel your happiness in this one.. Great write! love ya, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-20-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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