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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-16 08:22 PM

When did you last tell me you loved me?
When was the last time my heart skipped a beat?
How long ago were we both consumed by passion?
And basked in love's glorious heat?

My mind tries to resurface these memories
But they seem to be lost in the fray
Oh how I long to hear "I love you"
I wish you could say these words today

You used to live deep inside my heart
The place you took as your new address
How easily I would succumb
Whenever I felt your warm caress

But like an ember that has died in the fire
So have the sparks between me and you
There's such an incredible amount of distance
And love has all but vanished from view

The bridges of love have been frayed
You no longer seem to care how I feel
Unlike when we first met long ago
When so easily was my heart yours to steal

In denial am I as I sit here
All alone as I stare into space
No love remains anymore in our cabin
Was I to blame for this gradual fall from grace?

Suetang

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-07-16 08:27 PM

Sigh, no, Sue, as it takes two..so you aren't to blame in ever or a day...nice write of wonderment...very gentle smile

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-16 08:37 PM

SueTang~
This piece oozes such sad longing~
When love departs and leaves no forwarding address ...
it's hard to believe it can be found again~
But ... it can ... you just have to open the cabin windows
and let fresh, new love in~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-07-16 08:49 PM

Needs change, chemistry changes,
interests change, we keep moving,
sometimes in diverging directions.
Is anyone to blame?

You've captured well, this hollow pain.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-07-16 08:57 PM

Sad longing is right....I've been here....
reconnecting at even a deeper level then ever befor is possible....hard..... the decision of what YOU want is the hardest

Connie

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-16 09:34 PM

Stop, acknowledge, feel, ponder, learn, grow, and move on... easier said than done, I know, but the road keeps going forward if we look up a bit to see it... Heartfelt write, Sue.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-07-20 03:21 PM

Suetang-
   This just aches...so very sad.
   I must echo Marge...love can come
   again...you simply have to let it in.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-07-20 03:32 PM

aching..longing...tinged with such sadness...

nicely written...

Head up! Face forward! That's where tomorrow is... and where the answers and the love will be found...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-07-20 04:37 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts...James

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