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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-18 09:50 AM

                  fleeting genius

                   you
                     him
                       her
                         me

                   a spark

                   ignites

                   a fleet of genius

                   from within our insight

                   seize it

                      clutch it quick

                         in a wink
                         blink
                   it appears

                   realize ~

                   it sparked from

                   within

                   it is in

                            the

                                  I

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-18 09:53 AM

                   "realize ~

                   it sparked from

                   within"

that is great!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-18 10:07 AM

yep,
seize it
clutch it quick!!!

seems you did

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-18 10:42 AM

Wonderful read. I had a little trouble reading 'cuz of the spark in my I

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-18 10:53 AM

LadyInWhite~

Genius fleet
  swift of feet
Caught a sigh
  corner of eye~
Turn around
  let me see
If perhaps
  it is thee~
Ahh ! 'Tis true
  ingenious thoughts
  inspired by you~

*Thankee, poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-20 05:51 PM

Lady In White-
   I like this one SOOOO much!
   The style and the content are awesome.
   Enjoyed!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-07-21 05:17 AM

Smiles!

~ You do this dance only once ~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-07-24 03:08 PM

Cute commentaries, all of you! Thank you!

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