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In Between |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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In Between In waters twenty fathoms deep On ancient floor the creatures creep Just as they've done for eon’s age Surviving turn of every page Translucent blues like gemstones gleam In currents of the ocean stream Where fish glide with the water’s flow As forces swiftly move below On surfaces of sparkling green Atop the oceans sunlit shean Above the fathoms lies a bed That glows at dusk in sunset red T’is here I float upon a craft And watch the sea from vessels aft The wind and water touch my face And I know well my proper place Above the sea, the purple sky Fades into dark as day goes by A sea of stars then veils the black with twinkling lights from eons back From ocean’s depth to heaven’s height From sea to sea in moonlit night A man can only dream a dream And live in Nature’s in between Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
love the concept, love the images!!! love the serenity! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perspective..and the in between..allows us to see both, while still experiencing this place we exist.. very nicely written... and a pleasure to read |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
One of the best things of science is that it has allowed us to have a view of the ocean's splendors through television.... and this was as wonderful a read as any program I have ever watched.... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Liked it a lot, I have a aquarium and I am interested it the sea. You gave me a breif look,I enjoyed. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This has some of the mystery of the sea in it. Just lovely! Betty Lou Hebert |
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