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A Child
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A Child |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
A CHILD When, Where? Do we dare, To take that step, Times are Tuff and not so good, But what can we do. Ours lives are not the same Can we remain sane? The hopes and dreams, A house a car, a child is not that far. I fear, I love You are my love. All I can do I do for you. Is this a mistake? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting read... I like the sounds and the flow.. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem reminds me of the insecurities that I had before having our first child. Four children later, I can assure you that children are the greatest gift on the face of the earth. The greatest gift, I feel that you can give you child is for you to love the one as you've described in your poem and to do whatever you can for them. This is beautiful. |
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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
Yes a very nice poem..and yes children are the most precious gift we have... |
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