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an inch away |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If I could write this on my knees, in prayer--my heart soft in her plea, every atom split in two-- that's all that I would want from you. And if my tingling lips would stop, I'd damn them, from my very mouth... And should my eyes choose not to cry-- my breath would weep within each sigh... How shall I cry? Explain this pain? How give my all and still remain? Why is it you're an inch away? How can I leave? How can I stay? repost from...Open 7? |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, the choices we have are always the hardest at times, for the guidelines are not so apparent..very nice thoughtful write..gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And if my tingling lips would stop, I'd damn them, from my very mouth... And should my eyes choose not to cry-- my breath would weep within each sigh... How shall I cry? Explain this pain? How give my all and still remain? ========================== is this a moth test baby?  cuz ya know I dont know the answers... but I know I love the way you write... and I know I feel every line if rhyme divine and I know its my turn to polish the mirrors (and yes...I KNOW WE DID IT AGAIN) (11:55) damn were good  ROFLlove ya me twin :heart me Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
A very soft plea indeed...this flows quite nicely  very beautiful poem Serenity~Krista |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great poem on introspection |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great poem on introspection |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
serenity you can not leave untill we are here..lol |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Wanton poetry and soul searchingly emotional. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
So close yet so far.... really enjoyed this... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity...this is awesome |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I hope you found the answers you needed. POwerful emotions. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweeti, I see you banging your head on a stone wall here, and I am right next to you. Starting to get a headache myself. So many hard to resolve things. This is so good. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, Serenity. This was a powerful write. You ask some very valid questions. I wish I knew the answers. Look within and the way will reveal itself to you. You still rock! All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sometimes there is a sheet of plexiglass there and, although only an inch away, what's on the other side is untouchable.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Serenity, you know I like this one right? Awesome and into your little shelf in my library it goes. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah, Serenity- This one runs VERY deep..as do you. I could feel the struggle in every word. Wonderfully expressed emotions, my friend. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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