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Eternal Moment |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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To mankind eternity is not real Something we can't claim to know. If God will make us a good deal We would be willing to follow. We struggle to recall a moment in time Remembering each part makes the whole. But we'll collect all the moments we cam find Making our own patchwork for an eternal soul. Then a moment explodes in front of us Created for all by the terrorists of time. Building blocks of complete distrust Leaving permanent images in our mind. If we have not experienced eternity Why do these images seem forever? Forever, through pain, what a pity, With God, eternity will be no pain, ever. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You will find here that we are all willing to change things, soon...and that we welcome you with open arms... Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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songstress51 Junior Member
since 2001-09-15
Posts 17Anytown, USA |
nice work, you will find many great poets here. Enjoy! I hope that writing this helped you in dealing with the WTC...it seems the best way to dispell the anger we all feel. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Lsrry C, welcome and I hope you will enjoy your stay. Good poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Larry C! Great write...and welcome to Passions! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Larry! This is a stirring first post ... well done. I hope to read more. Best wishes, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Welcome aboard a site of civility. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for the thought-provoking poem. Yes, we have all had a glimpse of eternity. Hopefully it isn't the picture of terror that stays at the forefront, but rather the images of togetherness, empathy, compassion, and love for fellow man that are burned into our united visual cortex. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Larry! Welcome! I'm so glad you put this in...you know I love it! God is the almighty and will take away our pain, it's so wonderful knowing that he is there for us isn't it? I know you will love it here...I hope to read more soon! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Larry- I was curious today to see how much you have grown since you started at passions. Its seems that your poetry has always been near perfect and it is getting closer to beyond perfection everytime you write. You are an amazingly talented writer. I hope I can learn from you still. You are a man of Genuinely Perfect character. I appreciate every ounce of your friendship. God Bless |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now Kellie, It seems perfect really only works on one. God. But they are delicious thoughts and huge compliments. Thank you, I do enjoy writing and only write from the heart no training and little understanding of technique etc. As for character, I hide my flaws - mostly.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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