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Midnight Ramble |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Here Alone Waiting, Thinking, Hoping, Wanting Wanting for someone, you To make me alive My flesh is dead Drying Needing to live Hours pass Days Weeks My need raging inside me like a fire You inside me, Me Inside you, I can feel your feelings I want to feel your soul I do At Night sometimes when I am alone Every small noise a dagger in my heart Because it is not the soft low sounds of your pleasure But the sound of my own heart Sometimes I am sad Sad that not every moment in our life is free Sad that we were not children together Sad that life gives us what life sometimes will Sad that your eyes have ever cried tears Sad that……… At once happy Happy to know you To know you like perhaps no one has perhaps no one will again Love, that’s it love, Love is hard We are hard But as I sit here thinking of things, I realize This is love We are hardened But together Soft I sleep now The pillows around me giant boulders Pressing on me Holding me down Contrasting your soft warm soul I feel you wherever you are Making the rocks softer Filling my mind… soul Seeing you as a child Time Love Sleep History *********** [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My need raging inside me like a fire You inside me, Me Inside you, I can feel your feelings I want to feel your soul I do At Night sometimes when I am alone Every small noise a dagger in my heart Because it is not the soft low sounds of your pleasure But the sound of my own heart Sometimes I am sad Sad that not every moment in our life is free Sad that we were not children together Sad that life gives us what life sometimes will Sad that your eyes have ever cried tears Sad that……… At once happy Happy to know you To know you like perhaps no one has perhaps no one will again =============================== Im feeling every beautiful, intense word of this L Welcome back baby...welcome home... your gentle presence has been missed..as has your lovely poetry. heart hugs  jmFeels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very cool way you presented this...title seemed very appropriate. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie~  my friend....and thank you for your responses to the words I Ramble here....JLR~ Indeed I tend to ramble, some times in a senseless fashion....thank you for taking time....  be well....GE Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great depiction of how I minds travel in the middle of the night |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, Do we ever real know a heart? There's such longing, sadness and even comfort in this. It's an interesting piece to read over and over. I loved it, my friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
First, Lauren so good to see a post from you, and what a post! Ramble on girl, this was excellent, and the you captured the feelings of longing to perfection. Kudos. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh Lauren, this one touched me deeply, hon. Very powerful emotions you have captured perfectly. Very well done. *hugs* All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . Lauren. . . you have just said it all for me. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
This is beautiful! Can feel the love and longing in your heart! I'm new to all this, but this piece really touched my heart! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is one to be cherished, so full of sadness and yet beauty. Life IS hard, and yes, I wish I was a little girl again at times.... "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love this..and WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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