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Phantaza
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0 posted 2001-09-17 06:56 PM



So they say the good die young.
Why should the innocent leave?
And the evil proceed.
Sweet young angels
Never have a chance.
For their life is taken
In one loud blast.
And all they've endured
And all they've learned.
Left as is,
Nothing returned.

© Copyright 2001 Sarah C - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2001-09-17 07:10 PM


Welcome to passions....heart wrenched penned that translate so many feelings.

Check your mail for a special greeting

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2 posted 2001-09-17 08:00 PM


Very well said..Welcome to Passions!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2001-09-17 08:04 PM


Welcome to passions, I'm looking forward to seeing you around.
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4 posted 2001-09-17 09:07 PM


Welcome to the family...it's a sad time for us all, I hope you take a look around and join us in all our forums.  
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-09-17 09:38 PM


Thanks Phantaza for your beautiful words and a warm welcome to Passions

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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6 posted 2001-09-17 11:13 PM


Welcome to Passions, Sarah. Even with this awful tragedy, a tiny flame of hope burns within the souls of people everywhere.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-09-18 04:34 AM


Nice writing Phantaza...James
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-09-18 05:25 AM


Welcome to Passions Phantaza ... a heartening entrance, I hope to read more.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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9 posted 2001-09-18 05:15 PM


Way to go, Sarah - Nice entree to our forums... Welcome to Passions - It's a truly wunnerful place...
Phantaza
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10 posted 2001-09-18 05:40 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind comments, I look forward to more posts.

rwood
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11 posted 2001-09-18 06:07 PM


WELCOME PHANTAZA! I appreciate you sharing your verse with us. A very wonderful and exploring write. Look forward to more!

Sincerely,
Regina

cruz
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12 posted 2001-09-18 08:01 PM


youve done an awesome job in such a tiny space.  may you have an awesome learning experience here at passions.  well done!
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13 posted 2001-09-24 12:25 PM



Welcome to Passions!

DreamRomancer
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14 posted 2001-09-24 04:55 PM


You have entered the forum with a very powerful write indeed.  I look forward to reading more Phantaza.  Keep up the good work!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

SmartChick
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15 posted 2001-09-25 08:54 AM


This is very good. I like this. It is well said. I've asked myself that same question.
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