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0 posted 2001-08-26 01:24 AM



My Love

Your love completely envelopes me
Like a lover’s eternal embrace
Your whispered words soothe me
Chasing away my every darkest fear
The soft erotic touch of your body
Sends me tumbling through mystified ecstasy
The way you believe in me… you undying faith
Gives me a new unwavering strength
Your heart that you so openly offer
Fills my eyes with tears of joy and pride
In your gentle love filled brown eyes
I see myself in a new wondrous way
And through your kind and giving soul
I have found my ever lasting love.

TaraB

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Kay Vibbert
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1 posted 2001-08-26 01:27 AM


so have I, so have I, and he looked at me yesterday and said "I love you" that's all anyone can hope for!


"It's not gossip unless I tell it to somebody else!"  Lucy Ricardo

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2 posted 2001-08-26 01:51 AM


Kay - Isn't a wonderful feeling Thanks for stopping in.  And Welcome to Passions I haven't been for awhile.. but I'm positive I haven't seen your name before

TaraB

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3 posted 2001-08-26 02:14 AM


Wonderful....James
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4 posted 2001-08-26 11:39 AM


it is wonderful when you find it. . .

excellent my friend. . . from the heart. . .  

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5 posted 2001-08-26 11:53 AM


RP~   this is beautiful and so very heartfelt! oh, I like this one very much, a keeper  
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6 posted 2001-08-26 12:20 PM


This was very very good! I loved it!
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7 posted 2001-08-26 08:14 PM


James - Thank you for saying so... and for stopping in  

Sven - Yes it is wonderful And SO hard to find.  I pray it stays. Thank you

SEA - AWww.. thank you I'm glad you liked it

sans - Thank you!

TaraB

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8 posted 2001-09-24 01:00 AM


awww honey i love you too   even when it takes me a month to read this :P
-NCC

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

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9 posted 2001-09-24 07:49 AM


Napalm,

     I forgive ya hehe.  I'm glad you liked it dear. Love you right.back

TaraB

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10 posted 2001-09-24 09:47 AM


This was absolutely beautiful, and I agree! Love is and always should be that way. Wonderful poem Rosepetals! *S*
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11 posted 2001-09-25 09:10 AM


This is very good. I am glad you found your true love.
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12 posted 2001-09-25 06:40 PM


Dulcinea - Thank you for your kind words I'm glad you liked it.

SmartChick -   Thank you.  And so am I, I truely believe I have met my soul mate.  I am completely blessed beyond words to have him

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