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In Dark Or Light
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In Dark Or Light |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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In Light Or Dark What should it be Light or dark Stay in shadows Or create a spark In asking myself If to shed light Hold in emotion Or attempt to write Faced with today Smile of frown Open my heart Or sink back down Pretending or real Which are you Fooling forever Or can you be true Play hide and seek Truth or dare Where am I Or would you care Hope |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So many questions...so few clues. I really liked the way you said this! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Play hide and seek Truth or dare Where am I Or would you care ================ Indeed.......would you care? A good read with a haunting truth....(I dare say)....... Thank you...... ********************************* It's only me.......only me |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for taking the time to read JLR and your reply, much appreciated Yes I the mind questions, without clues , some times people are like cryptic crosswords Hope Hey thanks Enchanted for your kind response Hope |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Choices..and questions...you have presented them well... nicely done... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
My opinion is don't hold back, go for the spark, and let your creative light shine...... a good poem of many questions. |
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