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Open Poetry #15

Broken And Defeated

Manda_1982
Junior Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

0 posted 2001-07-17 02:46 AM

Cracked,
Shattered,
Splintered,
Split,
Crushed,
Fallen,
Trampled,
Fractured,
Torn,
Ripped,
Gashed,
Trampled,
Frayed,
Devastated,
Traumatized,
Conquered,
Overcome,
Vanquished,
Crushed…

I am Broken and Defeated

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-07-17 03:14 AM

Broken and defeated........and you have certainly said it in all ways......

I enjoyed it.......

Thank you
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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-17 07:53 AM

interesting.was talking about how many words it takes to make a poem and minimalism just yesterday...

nicely done

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-18 02:23 PM

Is there a reason you used trampled twice?
Freudian slip?
You cannot be broken or defeated unless you allow yourself to be broken and admit defeat.
Never surrender!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-07-18 04:14 PM

Sheesh...that would do it....if one stood still for it long enough....

start dancing....

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