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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-09-13 07:51 AM

To Eve

Phantoms ride my field today
Crested red in awes display
Thunder down a road of yore
Plunder me my very core.

Sweeping symbols agony
Breaching walls of euphony
Leaching on my shelters door
Black debris pours on my shore.

Sweet daffodils are down of head
And lilies show the earthen bed.
Brine has blurred my sharp of eye
My rind is pierced until I die

The angels blow in shades of stark
The sun has down to black of dark
The dust surrounds in weight of toll
And sets upon my very soul.

Forgive me this effete end, that
Makes my heart and head to bend.

In Remembrance 09/11/01
Seymour Tabin

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-13 08:09 AM

Oh Seymour~
Bless your sweet compassionate heart~
My head is bowed with yours, my friend~
I love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-09-13 08:31 AM

Hands holding hands
folding in prayer
words shall stand
as hearts still care

Thank you Sy

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-13 08:46 AM

Marge,
Thank you and hugs back. *L*

Sunshine,
Thank you sweet. *L*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-09-13 08:51 AM

Your heart is on your sleeve in this tender poetic reprieve ...

thank you for this beautiful tribute to mothers in mourning...
love you sweet Stinky

jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-09-13 09:14 AM

JM,
Thank you sweet, I'll be in touch. Love ya

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2001-09-13 10:42 AM

Sy, this is by far one of your best..it touches me deeply. Thank you.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-09-13 12:44 PM

Sy, I'm still in shock. Your poem touchd me so deeply, thank you for sharing your thoughts and compassion with us~

Hugs,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-09-13 02:37 PM

PoetdeVine,
Thank you so much for the read and kind words

Melissa,
Thank you and bless you.

Balladeer

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9 posted 2001-09-13 04:30 PM

this sets the right tone, my friend....

Martie

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California

10 posted 2001-09-13 05:26 PM

Sy:

You are an artist
who has painted the landscape, sorrow.

Hugs!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-09-13 05:29 PM

Seymour-
   Heartfelt and deeply touching, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2001-09-13 06:21 PM

Baslladeer,
Thank you Mike.

Martie,
sweet comment, thank you. *L*

Vlraynes,
Thank you Vicky.

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