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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-10 09:15 PM

*
I have suffered better days,
lain awake with better lays,
wasted time in better ways,
yet still I’m missing you.

*
I want you -
not just a part
but the heart of you,
to start
and never be through
with you.

*
Last night -
another drop of passion
to fill a bit more
this puddle me;
that rainstorm you.

(Hey! Under 20.)

*
My candle burns in the middle,
consuming from inside out.
Which ever way I turn,
I’m wicked.

(Maybe I'm getting a handle on this.)

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Topheth - All Rights Reserved

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

1 posted 2001-09-10 09:17 PM

have I told you, I really like your poetry

this rocks

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-10 09:19 PM

Topheth.this is good..I may try one of these short ones.
alan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-10 09:21 PM

I'm with Sea...It ROCKS!
I like it
I love it
I want some more of it!
Good stuff!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

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Member Rara Avis

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-09-10 09:52 PM

Good stuff, I like lots..

Sandra

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2001-09-10 10:06 PM

Topheth~
Concise - complete~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

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Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

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6 posted 2001-09-11 08:25 AM

very nice!! I have read several of your posts..and can see I am going to enjoy your writing a great deal...
I enjoyed!!

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-09-11 07:50 PM

Excellent, in twenty!

*smiles*

~Tier

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