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In the spirit of Twenty (even) or Less....
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In the spirit of Twenty (even) or Less.... |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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* I have suffered better days, lain awake with better lays, wasted time in better ways, yet still I’m missing you. * I want you - not just a part but the heart of you, to start and never be through with you. * Last night - another drop of passion to fill a bit more this puddle me; that rainstorm you. (Hey! Under 20.) * My candle burns in the middle, consuming from inside out. Which ever way I turn, I’m wicked. (Maybe I'm getting a handle on this.) [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-10-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 have I told you, I really like your poetry this rocks |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Topheth.this is good..I may try one of these short ones. alan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm with Sea...It ROCKS! I like it I love it I want some more of it! Good stuff!! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, I like lots.. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Topheth~ Concise - complete~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice!! I have read several of your posts..and can see I am going to enjoy your writing a great deal... I enjoyed!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent, in twenty! *smiles* ~Tier |
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