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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-08-30 03:20 PM





of life and death...

I teeter
upon the precipice
of knowing
and the possiility
of going
constantly aware
that there,
upon shinning
black surfaced abyss
my own reflection stares...
~Tier
8/01

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 08-30-2001).]

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-30 03:43 PM



Perhaps it is true that we meet ourselves coming and going....well done Tier....

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-09-01 05:20 PM


How wonderful this is Tiersdin, glad I caught up with it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Tiersdin
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3 posted 2001-09-01 05:33 PM


Thank you, Lady in white and Titia for your kind comments...

*smiles*

~Tier

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4 posted 2001-09-03 03:41 PM


perhaps another look is warranted my friend. . .

well done. .  

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Voiceless
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5 posted 2001-09-03 03:44 PM


I like the idea behind this
interesting thought..
Nicely done!

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mirror man
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6 posted 2001-09-03 09:29 PM


How did I miss this?  This is so good.  Thank you.  
Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2001-09-05 08:55 AM


yes...I think I can relate tto this one quite well... nicely done as usual..
always a pleasure to read your pennings..and ponder on the depths in them..


Tiersdin
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8 posted 2001-09-05 11:32 AM


Sven, You know, I often look twice yet nothing changes... *hug* Thank you for reading.

Voiceless, I am glad that you enjoyed reading, thank you *smiles*

mirror man, Thank you, I am glad that you like... *smiles*


Captain, Thank you for your kind words. I have been enjoying your works of late, as well...

*smiles*

~Tier

Topheth
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9 posted 2001-09-10 10:29 PM


Very nice...  I feel an affinity.
Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-09-11 07:46 PM


Thank you, thank you!

*the lady bows*

*smiles*

~Tier

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