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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-09-10 12:59 PM


Blue Eyes Dreaming
~~~


Not far it was from Heaven
'twas the very month of June
And the sweetest birds were singing
when first
she stole my tune
As if from out the bluest sky
an angel came to call
Quintessential
to Irish memory
with braids as I recall
~
The golden sun's shine o'er the dew
reflected through her eyes
like flowers
from a woodland path
her smile just mesmerized
With dancers wings
she stepped along
my song held in her arms
My blue eyes dreaming
hypnotized
now locked within her charms
~
"Good day kind sir"
sweet melody ...
embraced my very soul
With butterflies and rubber thighs
my tongue
I swear it swoll
My heart stood tall to brace my jaw
and lock the molars tight
The best I managed
was a smile
my voice had taken flight
~
Pausing
she locked her gaze to mine
reached out to my lapel
Placed a fragrant flower there
bent close
to share its smell
The moment stole my breath from me
I gazed in pure delight
Enchanted with her beauty rare
Awoke ...
...
to silent night
~~~



© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-10 01:05 PM


Ahh....."to sleep, per chance to dream" how sweet.   Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 2001-09-10 04:46 PM


well done Rex   I like this  
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3 posted 2001-09-10 04:51 PM


Good one! Enjoyed...Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2001-09-10 05:43 PM


ohhhh this is really beautiful....love it!!
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-09-10 06:07 PM


Rex~
You sure left us a beauty ~
October's close ... see ya'~
*smiles*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-09-10 06:53 PM


superbly done my friend. . . we'll be here. . .



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