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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-09-06 02:45 PM

You lied to her, you lied to me
the truth now known, I'm finally free.
What's this I find, almost a year!
No more lies, I will not hear.
I thought I found love with you,
but now I KNOW it was NEVER true.
Baby I've got my wings, I can not lie
so here I am, to tell you goodbye.
I hope your happy when you see the man in the glass
but as far as I'm concerned~
You can kiss my _ _ _ _!!

(venting stuff......grrr)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-09-06 02:50 PM

Aha that temptation to write those words...James

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-09-06 02:51 PM

that's right...you tell 'em...vent all you want...helen

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-09-06 02:54 PM

Vent. Vent. Now, vent some more!
Once you're done, show him the door!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 2001-09-06 03:01 PM

Spirited One - Perhaps you should give him a second chance.  Whatta ya think?  That other woman probably meant nothing to him.  Go ahead, he won't think less of you if you beg him to come back.  heh

BTW - We men are NOT all alike.  I only wish for womankind's sake that every man could be more like me.  Wouldn't this be a different world? *unsuspecting eyes*

I do like your poem.  It is filled with some really good expressions of emotion, and closure.  I hope you find peace and real love.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-09-06 04:52 PM

You Go Girl !!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

6 posted 2001-09-06 05:23 PM

I hope I never make you mad Gentle...I could see the fire in your eyes....Romantics fall harder than most people, but they are usually able to get up and try again.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-09-06 05:52 PM

ouch!

this packs a punch! Great writing.

and yes, the romantics fall hard, but we always try again, don't we ?!

"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2001-09-06 09:16 PM

Oh I'm sorry everyone, I'm just venting. I'm frustrated, aggravated, and very much so disapointed in myself as much as in him. Thanks for all the lovely comments, and Rusty, it takes alot to make me mad, I'm sure you never will......after all.....you are from Texas! (one of my favorite people places. *s*)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

9 posted 2001-09-10 06:39 PM

wow, in this poem, u diffently didnt have a GENTLE spirit...lol...nice job neways...

And I'd... give it all away
Just to have somewhere to go to...
Give it all away...
To have someone to come home to ...~Linkin Park

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

10 posted 2001-09-10 06:56 PM

Go for it!!! Find someone deserving.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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