Open Poetry #15 |
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Rainbow.........Tanka |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages ![]() |
![]() Stairway to heaven Soft colored phenomenon By wet sunny days Mysterious transparent Panorama of rainbow Charisma ~*TMP*~ 09/09/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It does look like a stairway to heaven! Beautiful write. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
The picture matches the poem. You did outstanding. alan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A wonderful tanka, Charisma! - with a perfect picture. I love your description of rainbows - how beautifully true ![]() Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just love how you do that! ![]() ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ The beauty of your thoughts just MUST be the pot of gold at the end of that beautiful rainbow. You paint the scenery soooooo delightfully~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Charisma, I am a rainbow lover and I especially enjoyed this one!! Thank you. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Charisma, I always enjoy your writings so much, this one is another beauty. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Duncan: glad you see that too ![]() thank you for your nice reply Alan: thank you for the outstanding ![]() ![]() Melissa: thank you so much, and it makes me happy that you liked my description ![]() Sea: thank you my dear friend ![]() ![]() Marge: you are such a beautiful lady...and I am lucky if I find you at the end of the rainbow as you are a lady with a golden heart ![]() ![]() ![]() Enchantress: Great to know, as I love rainbows too, they are so mysterious beautiful..... ![]() ![]() Titia: thank you for your always lovely comments... ![]() ![]() |
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