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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-09-09 03:31 PM

Stairway to heaven
Soft colored phenomenon
By wet sunny days
Mysterious transparent
Panorama of rainbow

Charisma
~*TMP*~
09/09/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-09-2001).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-09 03:39 PM

It does look like a stairway to heaven! Beautiful write.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-09 05:38 PM

The picture matches the poem. You did outstanding.
alan

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-09-09 06:07 PM

A wonderful tanka, Charisma! - with a perfect picture. I love your description of rainbows - how beautifully true

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-09 06:11 PM

I just love how you do that!

So beautiful

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-09 07:45 PM

Charisma~
The beauty of your thoughts just MUST be
the pot of gold at the end of that beautiful rainbow.

You paint the scenery soooooo delightfully~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-09 07:50 PM

Charisma, I am a rainbow lover and I especially enjoyed this one!! Thank you.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-09-09 07:55 PM

Dear Charisma, I always enjoy your writings so much, this one is another beauty.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-09-10 06:48 PM

Duncan: glad you see that too

thank you for your nice reply

Alan: thank you for the outstanding

Melissa: thank you so much, and it makes me happy that you liked my description

Sea: thank you my dear friend

Marge: you are such a beautiful lady...and I am lucky if I find you at the end of the rainbow as you are a lady with a golden heart

Enchantress: Great to know, as I love rainbows too, they are so mysterious beautiful.....

Titia: thank you for your always lovely comments...

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