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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-09-09 03:31 PM




Stairway to heaven
Soft colored phenomenon
By wet sunny days
Mysterious transparent
Panorama of rainbow

Charisma
~*TMP*~
09/09/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-09-2001).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-09-09 03:39 PM


It does look like a stairway to heaven!  Beautiful write.
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2 posted 2001-09-09 05:38 PM


The picture matches the poem. You did outstanding.
alan

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3 posted 2001-09-09 06:07 PM



A wonderful tanka, Charisma! - with a perfect picture.  I love your description of rainbows - how beautifully true  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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4 posted 2001-09-09 06:11 PM


I just love how you do that!   So beautiful  
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5 posted 2001-09-09 07:45 PM


Charisma~
The beauty of your thoughts just MUST be
the pot of gold at the end of that beautiful rainbow.

You paint the scenery soooooo delightfully~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-09-09 07:50 PM


Charisma, I am a rainbow lover and I especially enjoyed this one!!  Thank you.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2001-09-09 07:55 PM


Dear Charisma, I always enjoy your writings so much, this one is another beauty.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Charisma
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8 posted 2001-09-10 06:48 PM


Duncan: glad you see that too  
thank you for your nice reply

Alan: thank you for the outstanding  

Melissa: thank you so much, and it makes me happy that you liked my description  

Sea: thank you my dear friend  

Marge: you are such a beautiful lady...and I am lucky if I find you at the end of the rainbow as you are a lady with a golden heart     

Enchantress: Great to know, as I love rainbows too, they are so mysterious beautiful.....  

Titia: thank you for your always lovely comments...

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