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Open Poetry #15

Time...

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

0 posted 2001-09-10 06:18 AM

Choice,
that I could make
in everything
'cept to turn back
time

Time,
showed no mercy
had me victimised
had me resigned

...to the fact that
I’ll never have the
chance
to try out with

thee

[This message has been edited by cottage (edited 09-10-2001).]

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-09-10 08:21 AM

Cottage..it is sad when time takes things away from us but sometimes it turns out to be a blessing. Good read. I like how you have written it.
alan

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-09-10 08:27 AM

hi cottage(i love your name!)

like alan, i like the way this is written in a matter-of-factly, understated way...it just how arouses this reader to feel the ache ever more

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-10 08:58 AM

Cottage,
Well done I like your simplicity.

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