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Open Poetry #15

Fortune

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-08 11:17 PM

Fortune

It’s poor
that we’re unable
to spend more time together.
I’m deeper indebted
each day you are with me
for the price you pay at home
(I shouldn’t cost you so).
Yet when I’m with you,
I feel rich.
You’re a fortune-
cookie.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-09-2001).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-09-08 11:22 PM

Hi! Let me be the first to welcome you to Passions! Hope you like it here..great poem!
Can't wait to see more.

<3 RosePetal

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-09 10:50 AM

this is fantastic, I like how you did this

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-09 10:54 AM

Topheth,
I like, simple and direct.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-09-10 06:34 AM

I really love the way this read. A tightly wrapped analogy with heart! Nice to meet you
Topheth!

Sincerely,
Regina

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-09-10 08:45 AM

I wish you good fortune and profound wisdom..

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