Open Poetry #15 |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan ![]() |
He He was a lonely soul little love did he show His rock hard convictions had made him cold Without laughter he was a solemn soul He lived as if alone in his lifeless inner hole While all around him was a world to behold For false pride had sold his soul He deemed all others childish Out of control He lived his life in his shadow filled hole That he created to ease his courage less soul Then one day A group of caring people took hold They shared their feelings of old His heart began to unfold He gave up control He based his new life on the love he had found It shed new light on his soul He was bold He told stories to deep to be told New warmth filled his soul Giving him courage Transforming him as a whole Like a flower he grew Becoming a new soul He gave thanks to the Lord And to all as a whole Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
To surrender totally can be the start of wonderful things. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Good work. I like the ending, I am glad He changed in a positive way : ) <3 RosePetal |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Shadow974..this is a wonderful read with a great message inside..good job alan |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shadow~ Nicely done. Shows what the power of people reaching in can mean to others~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... and he was born anew.. Lovely.. ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you for sharing....enjoyed it very much! Charisma |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful ![]() makes big smiles ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and in this. . . I'm sure that he found strength. . . well done shadow. . . I like the way that your work makes me think. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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