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Sweet Love |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Sweet Love Oh baby don’t you really see How your, sweet love pulls me Deeper inside celestial clouds My heart melts when you’re around Oh how I reflect in lover’s fire Passions of irresistible desire Inferno within yearning heat Flaming waves evoke love's beat How we float to enraptured heights United in passionate flight Were you take off my robe of sense Exploring eager burning tense Entangled deeper in fiery sea Calling your name out, to set me free of delirious feelings which sweep me above I’m losing control in the arms of my love Charisma ~*TMP*~ 27/08/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-06-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
woooohooooo!!  this is wonderful!! I can feel the heat  "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, That is quite a web you spun. Enjoyed |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Charisma....this is so sweet and warm..i love the thoughts that you envoked in my mind. I Like this a lot. alan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Girlfriend ... this is a hottie~ Whew !... fanning the flames~ Muchly enjoyed ... got 911 on standby !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I am not sure, young Lady, if this was your 3000th post or not, but just in case it was, well done, and Congratulations... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Charisma, You never cease to amaze me. Enjoyed this much. Munda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Go ahead and lose control and enjoy the beauty of love...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: oh my....passing you the fan. Glad you liked it Sey: I love to spin webs like these glad you enjoyed it Alan: so glad that I could evoke some thoughts Marge: thought I could blame the warmth on the weather my dear friend, glad you enjoyed Lady in White: thank you and yes it was my 3000th thank you for the congratulations Munda: thank you for your kind reply my friend JamesMichael: I will my friend...as love is such a precious gift. [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-06-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whew....talk about imagery this is passionate and romantic wonderful writing and rhyming Charisma A perfect poem to mark a milestone with. spicy & nicey |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This one evokes imagery and sweat upon my brow. Nicely done. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh how I reflect in lover’s fire Passions of irresistible desire Inferno within yearning heat Flaming waves evoke love's beat I love this stanza..amazing! <3 RosePetal |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Janet Marie: thank you my dear friend glad you liked this spicey rhyme Rusty Knight: imaginations can do wonderful things..right... RosePetal: Glad you like that stanza too Thank you all for reading and taking time to reply |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- Wow! This one sizzles! I'm liking this very much! Wonderfully penned! Congratulations on 3000!!  Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I love SWEET LOVE! Congrats on your 3000th post. Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderfully steamy, congradulations!!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Vicky: thank you my dear friend, glad that you liked it Nancy: thank you for the *wow*...glad that you love it shadow974: thank you for reading and your kind reply |
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