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Open Poetry #15

As long as...

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-09-09 02:09 PM

As long as strong gets a yes
and weak receives a no
I'll be standing against a sea of distress
holding my ground and passing the test
As long as the sun rises
and becomes the earth's guider
I'll be living not vicariously through the wiser
but becoming my own dream and destiny
as long as strong is what I feel inside
then I can tell myself there's nothing wrong with
being me

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-09 02:51 PM

indeed there isn't. . .

great job. . . a strong declaration of who you are. . .

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-09-09 03:13 PM

yes...live your own dreams!!! helen

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-09 04:58 PM

Alot to think about and nod to. I liked this very much.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-09-09 05:35 PM

Great read. One does not live until he lives his dreams.
alan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-09-09 07:15 PM

I enjoyed this very much!! Thank you.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

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