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Open Poetry #15

Closing My Eyes I Drift

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-09-08 10:11 AM

Closing My Eyes I Drift

Dull, humdrum and boring
My mind finds a cure
Closing my eyes I drift
Fantasy takes a tour

Like my favourite songs
Each day I can play
Closing my eyes I drift
Together we fly away

Fantasy grabs my hand
Strokes to my hair
Closing my eyes I drift
I know you are there

Smiles embraced faces
Fantasy was shared
Closing my eyes I drift
Into dreams we dared

In remembering always
The promises made
Closing my eyes I drift
Where dreams never fade

Hope ©2001

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-08 10:17 AM

In remembering always
The promises made
Closing my eyes I drift
Where dreams never fade

This is where I want to go....You know I love dream poems..

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2001-09-08 10:19 AM

Hey thanks Rusty Knight
yes dreams are for keeping
even after sleeping
No one can take dreams away
Hope

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-09-08 10:39 AM

I loved the first and last stanza of your poem. Very well done Hope! Last year, I met an australian soap opera star, I must say
australians have the sexiest accent!
((hugs))

<3 RosePetal

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2001-09-09 08:10 PM

Hi Hope,

This was wonderful, enjoyed very much,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-09-09 08:23 PM

Good poem, hold on to your dreams.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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