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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Statistically Speaking I don't wish to be a number at least not of that kind the letter D I would subtract if only in my mind. I never would have wanted to be of partner-less. That letter D gets on my nerves puts me into distress. Why can't the abc's let go of letters that bring hurt. Which ones would you want to forget, which ones would you convert? That D pretends to be a smile in language spoken here. But in my mind when it appears it only causes fear. It should have been expected but it wasn't, Dumb of me. I dislike that letter so, that one right after C. ~Wynter..playing around ...for now "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Interesting and good play on words, I like. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
I truly enjoyed. And a big grin for these: "That D pretends to be a smile in language spoken here. But in my mind when it appears it only causes fear." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like your lovely thoughts very much... Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy...thank you, that process of Ding is not one bit fun...of course I am talking about Divorce but it may mean other things to other readers... It's tough being in limbo..although I love doing the Limbo. Now that L has some soft meanings..I would never remove the letter that comes after K. Lovingly, ~Wynter/M...still messing around..a bit *s T as long as your grin isn't made from that D  thank you, ~Wynter Charisma..have any letters you would like to omit? thank you dear ~smiling Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
loved the play on words.. the concept you used was original.. and originality usually makes for the best poems.... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hmmmm...but then I would be Uncan. I think I'm going to have to keep just this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Hmmmmmmmmm ! This is VERY interesting~ Layers of intrigue~ Hey ... just took notice ... I might not have to rely on that letter either~ *LOL @ Uncan ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
VEry nicely done, I always enjoy your words. Gloom |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I enjoyed your play on words. good read. alan |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A little light hearted htinking never hurt anyone and it's fun to read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
GhostWriter_6 thank you..was discussing something with someone and the idea crossed my mind how I hated the D word and never expected it to be in my vocabulary...thus the play on words. I appreciate your comments. *s Duncan You are too funny...gave me a laugh, I hadn't thought about what that would do to others names...Uncan..pretty neat though *s thank you for the visit. ~Wynter Marge Haaaaaaaa you too, made me laugh...well don't rely on that letter if you don't have to *s thanks Marge...hugsssss oh and yes Uncan gave me a nice smile too Professor Gloom glad you could enjoy a taste of my humor ...thank you ~Wynter Alan Always a pleasure to be read, thank you *s Rex Good to see you..yes a little humor can never hurt especially if directed at oneself. Thank you *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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