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Alan
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0 posted 2001-09-08 03:16 PM




Run your fingers thru my hair
If you dare
Run your lips across my cheek
Make my legs go weak
Let our hearts hold each other
Like the sky holds the moon and stars
Thrill me with anticipation
Of the proclamation
Of our love

Alan
09/08/01


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
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1 posted 2001-09-08 03:20 PM


Go Alan!!!

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Zinsser
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2 posted 2001-09-08 03:22 PM


Beautiful Words....
~Connie~

Domzi
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3 posted 2001-09-08 03:26 PM


Short and sweet. I likes!!!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-09-08 03:27 PM


Very nice Alan...James
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5 posted 2001-09-08 03:37 PM


*sigh*....love it  

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-09-08 03:44 PM


Alan! *sweet smile curving rubied lips… eyes dancing softly.. a soft laugh rising*....
Oh my...yes, good write indeed...yes, oh... yes.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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7 posted 2001-09-08 08:08 PM


Thank you everyone. Sorry I haven't got back sooner.  
Topheth
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8 posted 2001-09-08 11:07 PM


Short and sweet - my favorites.  Enjoyed!
Paula Finn
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9 posted 2001-09-08 11:30 PM


These are such lovely thoughts Alan
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Gaia
10 posted 2001-09-08 11:33 PM


This reminded me of how I felt listening to an old Carly Simon song, one that I still love called  "Anticipation"
Thanks, Kacy

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11 posted 2001-09-09 12:38 PM


very romantic Alan, I like this, such a soft feel  
Dee
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12 posted 2001-09-10 05:25 AM


Alan, an invitation that would be hard for her to refuse. Softly, beautifully said.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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