Open Poetry #15 |
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anticipation |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Run your fingers thru my hair If you dare Run your lips across my cheek Make my legs go weak Let our hearts hold each other Like the sky holds the moon and stars Thrill me with anticipation Of the proclamation Of our love Alan 09/08/01 |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Go Alan!!! Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful Words.... ~Connie~ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Short and sweet. I likes!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Alan...James |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....love it ![]() Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan! *sweet smile curving rubied lips… eyes dancing softly.. a soft laugh rising*.... Oh my...yes, good write indeed...yes, oh... yes. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you everyone. Sorry I haven't got back sooner. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Short and sweet - my favorites. Enjoyed! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
These are such lovely thoughts Alan |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This reminded me of how I felt listening to an old Carly Simon song, one that I still love called "Anticipation" Thanks, Kacy |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very romantic Alan, I like this, such a soft feel ![]() |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Alan, an invitation that would be hard for her to refuse. Softly, beautifully said. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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