Open Poetry #15 |
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Meeting You Again |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Innocence lost In back seat lessons, Once guarded By jealous silence, Lives… Merged before Became strangers, Tangled in Time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Could not have said it better myself. Enjoyed |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
So much said... so much remains.... |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Seymour you comment is appreciated Lady... always more to be said or always the remains to be examined... thanks for the comment |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
how do you do it? shrink all of adolescence and its youthful passion into a few lines and then its consequences into a few more |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Vas... I thinkit is because I am simple minded...and can't handle long complex thoughts. Thanks for your comment |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Rather like a nugget of gold -- very dense, in a small space, shining with brilliance and value. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Mark! glad you liked... but it is probably more like coal than gold... there is a potential fire in those meetings.. ( smiling) |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You acumen contiues to grow, you rascal ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And I thought the medicine was working..well back to the doctor and see if he can shrink it again... ( chuckling) Thanks for the comment my friend |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ *smiling* And honestly don't know why, but~ keep getting this image of a '57 Chevy~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Two sips thrashing in the night. Ah, but we've our memories. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Marge... I believe it was an old chrysler... (smiling) Thanks for reading and commenting RS... ( chuckling) yes I think you said it well.. thanks for reading! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - your words are very meaningful. I enjoyed your writing... BC |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks Bill.. I guess we all hope our words are meaningful..appreciate the comment!! |
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