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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-08 09:46 AM


Among silken shadows

Her presence
Will be
Known

Floating dress
Gently spreads


Invitation


Dark music flickers

Swaying movements


Nightly desire


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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Calif.
1 posted 2001-09-08 05:55 PM


Very Good.... Almost the wrong Forum  LOL
~Connie~

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-09-08 05:59 PM


Connie:  ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-09-08 06:43 PM


Delicious little write here.. Sounds like a good night..
Sandra

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-09-08 07:36 PM


Mmmm....YUMMY!!!    

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

shadow974
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Michigan
5 posted 2001-09-08 07:41 PM


Nice write Mark.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-09-09 01:44 PM




OOOO.....This has the smoothness and the seduction of a vampire presence.....or is it just me...?


Be ware.....lest it turns out to be some evocation.....lol  

I really enjoyed it....

Thank you
***********************

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-09-09 03:21 PM


Sandra -- delicious indeed.  How could the night be otherwise?

Nancy -- most definitely.

Dan, thank you.

My Melody, I commend your intuition -- that's basically what I was picturing.  I do my best to always stay aware -- only an invocation from my stirring Halloween spirit...  Thank you for your presence.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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Tennessee
8 posted 2001-09-10 06:49 AM


Sounds a little like Lolita/Carmen. Very
enticing!

Sincerely,
Regina

kaile
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singapore
9 posted 2001-09-10 08:18 AM


this seems promising...i hope i encounter such women often...
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