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Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-08 10:17 PM

I have been kissed
With a kiss filled with compassion
But there was no passion

I have been kissed
With a kiss filled with heart
It was warm right from the start

But the fire died
Then the kisses went cold
I felt I was handed fools gold

I have been kissed
By friends of old
But the kisses were just plain cold

But the one kiss
That haunts me even now
Didn’t even make me say wow

The kiss that melted my heart
Is a kiss that shall never die
It was when you kissed me with your eyes

alan aka Icyheart
09/08/01

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-08 10:45 PM

Ahh...*sigh* This has such a tender ending to it...I was wishing for another stanza.
Enjoyed! Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2001-09-08 11:44 PM

Sometimes a look is all it takes to feel it all...loved, held...kissed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-09 10:57 AM

my goodness you do that so well

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-09-09 11:05 AM

Does this

count too? For you deserve it.

What a beautiful poem you wrote

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-09-09 11:12 AM

The kiss that melted my heart
Is a kiss that shall never die
It was when you kissed me with your eyes

Beautiful expressed!!

Charisma

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

6 posted 2001-09-09 02:01 PM

loved this...and love getting kissed with the eyes. know exactly what you mean.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-09-09 02:36 PM

Thank you everyone. I hope you all get to feel that kind of kiss.
Enchantress..for you from "Icy"

The look in those eyes
Made me feel your love that day
Touching my mind, heart, and soul in a special way

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2001-09-09 03:49 PM

How nice this is....Eyes the windows to who we really are...
~Connie~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-09-09 04:59 PM

*sigh*....such a tender lovely write....

I loved it.....

{{{hugs}}}

*************************

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-09-09 05:30 PM

Thank you Connie.glad to know you enjoyed it..
Thank you..MyEnchanted_Melody..hope it made you smile...and thanks for the hug

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2001-09-09 06:48 PM

Surely this
is a kiss
to remember....

wonderful!

~Tier

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2001-09-09 07:03 PM

Mr Icyheart, you better stop being so non icy, you are giving yourself away..

Sandra

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-09-09 07:19 PM

Well...Bless your heart!! Good thing I stopped back and caught the last stanza. *sigh* Thank you so much!! Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

14 posted 2001-09-09 09:07 PM

Nice, the eyes express love.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

15 posted 2001-09-09 09:30 PM

OMG! ive felt such kiss! it was a looong time ago...and i STILL think about it..what an awesome thing.... *sigh*...i'll have to find that poem of mine....lol

this is a great one alan..really enjoyed this kiss...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i've been lonely too long..now i'm ready to be loved too much.." ty herndon

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

16 posted 2001-09-09 10:04 PM

Tiersdin...this kiss shall be remembered for a very long time..thank you for reading and commenting...
Sandra..thank you. Do you really think I'm giving it away?
Nancy...you should watch what you ask for. *wink* I might just give it to you if I can. hehehe
Shadow...the eyes can hide nothing that is real. Thank you for reading and replying
dgvarner...sometimes a kiss such as this is just out of this world...glad I gave you a good memory to think of..

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

17 posted 2001-09-09 10:26 PM

The last line is one of those...wish I had written that lines. Great write.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

18 posted 2001-09-09 11:26 PM

Alan...this is simply scrumptious...into my library...it made me feel that electric connection! wonderful work, here.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

19 posted 2001-09-09 11:33 PM

Duncan,,thank you. I am glad you liked it

serenity...thank you..you made me smile..glad you liked it...

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

20 posted 2001-09-10 05:00 AM

That moment when your eyes meet for the first time is heart stopping. You have captured that moment so well, Alan.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

21 posted 2001-09-10 08:15 AM

i just read dgvarner's poem and this seems like the perfect complement for it...it amazes me how the same event(ie. kissed by the eyes) can be captured in two different yet fascinating ways..

thanks for the read

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

22 posted 2001-09-10 08:18 AM

Thank you Dee..

Faterider..thanks

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