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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-09-08 08:08 PM





Autumn Leaves Haiku

Autumn leaves cascade
all the colours of the earth
carpeting the ground




Autumn Glory Haiku

Rainbows sail the sky
in the glory of autumn
where God and man touch



Autumn Artwork Haiku

Summer bids farewell
Autumn paints a masterpiece
'pon God's vast canvas

By Melissa P. Monette


"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-08 08:11 PM


mmmmmmmmmm  
yes, I can't wait!! Beautiful Melissa!! Always  

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shadow974
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2 posted 2001-09-08 08:13 PM


Very nice I love these, nature what a gift.

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And run out to catch it.
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Alan
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3 posted 2001-09-08 08:45 PM


Melissa..the picture is beautiful as were the haikus. Autumn is a beautiful time of the year and you wrote it perfect.
alan

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-09-08 09:53 PM


Melissa,
All three are well done. Enjoyed

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5 posted 2001-09-08 10:02 PM


I love all three Melissa  
I do wish it was Autumn here though, my favourite season  


Maree

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6 posted 2001-09-08 10:07 PM



Melissa-
   These are really beautiful.
   Very nicely done.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky


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7 posted 2001-09-08 10:29 PM


Beautiful Melissa...and they fit so well with one of the famous K. cottage pictures.  Nancy.

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  so you won't ever forget me~

Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-09-09 02:18 PM



Thank you everyone   I'm eager for Autumn to arrive as well~

Spring and Autumn are my favourite seasons...
I'm lucky to reside in Canada - we get the benefit of experiencing 4 seasons year round.
But, Spring and Autumn are so beautiful here!!!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Chelsea~
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9 posted 2001-09-09 11:40 PM


missy,
you describe autumn
so well  

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10 posted 2001-09-10 01:58 AM


Wow, this is amazing work, Melissa!  All three of these were so well done, namely the third one.  I also like the colours you did each one in, and the font styles... it was just perfect.
The titles were perfectly selected.  Great work.
~Allan

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11 posted 2001-09-10 07:46 PM


The colors that you use here, make me wish that it was Autumn right now.

Great job.

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12 posted 2001-09-10 07:53 PM


no one does haiku like you do. . . lol  

great job my friend. . .  

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13 posted 2001-10-31 06:14 PM


Lovely haikus, Melissa....very picturesque.  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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14 posted 2002-01-16 04:36 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint the most prettiest visions! (kiss on cheek) The beauty of autumn blushes in your gorgeous words, I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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