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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-09-17 10:07 AM


             



Luminous Rays

In shadows essence
filter of luminous rays
light will overcome
fathom darkness innermost
love beams comfort mourning souls


Charisma
~*TMP*~
17/09/01




[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-17-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-17 10:43 AM



You know how much I like this one....

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2 posted 2001-09-17 11:05 AM


Well done Charisma. And thank you
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3 posted 2001-09-17 06:57 PM


"light will overcome"

indeed my friend. . . well done. . .  

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4 posted 2001-09-17 08:37 PM


fresh oil from your spirit, Charisma, thank you

Kathleen

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5 posted 2001-09-17 11:38 PM


Charisma~
Lovely and serene, sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-09-18 05:39 AM


Beautifully captured Charisma.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2001-09-18 08:02 AM


May the sun shine brightly again
Thank you, Charisma - Your words are lovely..

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8 posted 2001-09-18 08:30 AM


by any chance: where you here taking that beautiful picture??
tanka's.... does it need any encouragement?
think not!

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9 posted 2001-09-18 06:43 PM


Thank you so much for leading my thoughts today to beautiful light. Hope will shine through! Prayers and Peace.

Sincerely,
Regina

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10 posted 2001-09-18 11:26 PM


Charisma...tanka very much for this beautiful, serene poem, and the picture was awesome (love art and photos), I like the way it reflects hope and I related it to the current events.  Wonderful!

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11 posted 2001-09-19 12:11 PM


This speed of light we need tonight and done quite right.
Charisma
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12 posted 2001-09-19 08:49 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful replies as they are highley appreciated by me.
May God bless you all

Charisma

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Charisma,
this is just SO beautiful  

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14 posted 2001-11-11 04:01 AM


CharismaSweetie, gosh how I miss reading your exquisite tankas lately...
Beautiful expression dearPoetFriend and I thank you for a splendid read...
HugsNsmiles2uAlways
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-11-2001).]

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15 posted 2002-01-16 04:38 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the Light will always overcome our hearts and fill us with hope and love! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend, your tankas are always so outstanding! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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