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0 posted 2001-09-04 12:06 PM


    Would I ?

If I had to do it
All over again
Would I ?
Let you reel me in
With your smile
Allow you to tempt me
With your charms
Believe your excuses
And tall tales
Wait patiently for
Your phone call
Eagerly for your return
Become strong for you
To lean on
To depend on
If I had to do it
All over again
Would I ?
Yes.


Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (edited 09-04-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-04 12:07 PM



Oh, Yes!

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2 posted 2001-09-04 12:51 PM


Yes. Me too. Yes

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3 posted 2001-09-04 01:16 PM


Oh Yes!! Good write Nightshade!!

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4 posted 2001-09-04 01:18 PM


Definatley yes.  Great write.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-09-04 01:20 PM


Some times it is just nice to know.Keep up the good writes.It is good to have you here at passions.

paladin

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6 posted 2001-09-04 01:32 PM


Yes Indeed

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7 posted 2001-09-04 01:37 PM


Gee, thankyou all for your warm comments, I didn't expect them. Hugs.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2001-09-04 03:40 PM


"Would I do it again" haunts us all at one time or another.  The answer is usually "yes" if we are the same person we were then.  I enjoyed the way you put it Nightshade.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).]

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9 posted 2001-09-04 03:56 PM


Me too...James
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11 posted 2001-09-05 08:52 PM


It's not if you win or lose.....

Nicely done.  

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12 posted 2001-09-05 10:24 PM


Wow...thankyou.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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13 posted 2002-01-13 09:37 PM


wow nightshade..so much feeling in this piece..runs right through me..real nice write..
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