Open Poetry #15 |
Would I ? |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Would I ? If I had to do it All over again Would I ? Let you reel me in With your smile Allow you to tempt me With your charms Believe your excuses And tall tales Wait patiently for Your phone call Eagerly for your return Become strong for you To lean on To depend on If I had to do it All over again Would I ? Yes. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh, Yes! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes. Me too. Yes If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Yes!! Good write Nightshade!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Definatley yes. Great write. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Some times it is just nice to know.Keep up the good writes.It is good to have you here at passions. paladin |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
Yes Indeed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gee, thankyou all for your warm comments, I didn't expect them. Hugs. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
"Would I do it again" haunts us all at one time or another. The answer is usually "yes" if we are the same person we were then. I enjoyed the way you put it Nightshade. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's not if you win or lose..... Nicely done. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow...thankyou. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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gladiator Junior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 10 |
wow nightshade..so much feeling in this piece..runs right through me..real nice write.. |
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