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Morning Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Kiss me softly darling Jazna oh my heart begins to stir when your searching lips deliver sweet delight that makes me quiver from the warmth of your lips pursed. Kiss me deeply darling Jazna when the night returns to earth. Take my hand and all my wishes upon your breast of morning sun. Take me where my dreams won't perish across the hills of love I cherish and count my heart-beats one by one. Songbirds and dawn and time and reason stay my spirit in your morning love. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to re-language historie [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 09-07-2001).] |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is beautiful, I really really liked it! <3 RosePetal |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--what a sigh this has in it!! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Take me where my dreams won't perish I like this line very much. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LohnJohn won't approve of this but i think this is too good to pass up... i liked the last two lines especially  |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
Beautiful as always sweet friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...when the night returns to earth... what a line.. well done, Sir! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kiss me deeply darling Jazna when the night returns to earth. Take my hand and all my wishes upon your breast of morning sun. ==================================== Big ole friggen sigh  this is a romantic gem E-babers... I recall reading Jazna rhymes before... very cool write poet of the "vantastic" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - you romantic you!... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . you're going to make the rest of us look bad. . . great job my friend. . . wonderfully done from your pen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
count my heart-beats one by one.... you....oh your writings are awesome..can't count my heart-beats whíle I'm reading this. excellent as always my dear friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Smooth as silk. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Take my hand and all my wishes upon your breast of morning sun. Take me where my dreams won't perish across the hills of love I cherish" So lovely, Ethome! Excellent sentiment and imagery  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And she will...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This is such a lovely song of Jazna~ You captured a beauty from your wellspring of memories, my friend. What the heart remembers, the pen writes with feeling~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
real nice,excellent write ethome. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wonderful expression enjoyed |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ooh baby! this is a mushy romantic little ditty now isnt it.. very nice ethome..! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beauiful words, and so well written.... Greeneyes~ ***** "If a single star I see |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Very nice and beautiful. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I didn't expect so many responses to this simple love song. I want to thank everyone so very much for taking time to read this ....I appreciate it and I love you all....Eric ethome True |
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