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ethome
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0 posted 2001-09-07 10:19 PM


Kiss me softly darling Jazna
oh my heart begins to stir
when your searching lips deliver
sweet delight that makes me quiver
from the warmth of your lips pursed.
Kiss me deeply darling Jazna
when the night returns to earth.

Take my hand and all my wishes
upon your breast of morning sun.
Take me where my dreams won't perish
across the hills of love I cherish
and count my heart-beats one by one.
Songbirds and dawn and time and reason
stay my spirit in your morning love.    


The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 09-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-09-07 10:22 PM


This is beautiful, I really really liked it!

<3 RosePetal

Martie
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2 posted 2001-09-07 11:22 PM


ethome--what a sigh this has in it!!
The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-09-07 11:29 PM


Take me where my dreams won't perish

I like this line very much.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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4 posted 2001-09-07 11:29 PM


LohnJohn won't approve of this but i think this is too good to pass up...

i liked the last two lines especially

Poet Unknown
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5 posted 2001-09-08 12:00 PM


Beautiful as always sweet friend
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-09-08 12:20 PM



...when the night returns to earth...

what a line..

well done, Sir!

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-09-08 12:22 PM


Kiss me deeply darling Jazna
when the night returns to earth.

Take my hand and all my wishes
upon your breast of morning sun.
====================================

Big ole friggen sigh  
this is a romantic gem E-babers...
I recall reading Jazna rhymes before...
very cool write poet of the "vantastic"

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2001-09-08 02:53 PM


ethome - you romantic you!...

BC

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9 posted 2001-09-09 02:19 PM


hey. . . you're going to make the rest of us look bad. . .  

great job my friend. . . wonderfully done from your pen. . .

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10 posted 2001-09-09 02:27 PM


count my heart-beats one by one....

you....oh your writings are awesome..can't count my heart-beats whíle I'm reading this.

excellent as always my dear friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-09-09 02:30 PM


Ethome,
Smooth as silk.

Honeybee
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12 posted 2001-09-09 02:31 PM


"Take my hand and all my wishes
upon your breast of morning sun.
Take me where my dreams won't perish
across the hills of love I cherish"

So lovely, Ethome! Excellent sentiment and imagery  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2001-09-09 04:25 PM


And she will...James
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14 posted 2001-09-09 04:42 PM


ETHome~
This is such a lovely song of Jazna~
You captured a beauty from your wellspring of memories, my friend.

What the heart remembers, the pen writes with feeling~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

shadow974
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15 posted 2001-09-09 04:59 PM


real nice,excellent write ethome.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Rex Allen McCoy
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16 posted 2001-09-09 07:34 PM


Wonderful expression
enjoyed

dgvarner
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17 posted 2001-09-09 09:56 PM


ooh baby!  this is a mushy romantic little ditty now isnt it..    

very nice ethome..!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i've been lonely too long..now i'm ready to be loved too much.."  ty herndon

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18 posted 2001-09-09 10:12 PM


beauiful words, and so well written....
Greeneyes~


*****

"If a single star I see
Ever made a wish come true
It would bring you back to me"

Topheth
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19 posted 2001-09-09 10:18 PM


Very nice and beautiful.
ethome
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20 posted 2001-09-10 04:32 AM


I didn't expect so many responses to this simple love song. I want to thank everyone so very much for taking time to read this ....I appreciate it and I love you all....Eric ethome True
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