Open Poetry #15 |
Hang On! |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hang on! Even if you’re your pinkie’s all that’s left of your grip. Even if you’re heart is bleeding down to it’s last drip... Hang on! Sept. 8, 2001 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
That's some big font! I agree...hang on for as long as you can. <3 RosePetal |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Ok ... but please don't hang on my pinky couldn't resist ... I'm hanging my head in shame now ... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
RP, that's in case the message wasn't powerful enough on its own...hehehehehe, but actually, sometimes when a verse is short, I have some silly idea I still need to fill up the page, not waste the cyber paper, ya know. No, no, Rex Allen, I'd not hang on your pinky unless you offered it with your whole heart. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Good advice....but did you have to shout....us bleeding heart romantic guys are sensitive you know....sniff sniff. I like the way it worked Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
RK, see the reply just above yours LOL |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - I've been hanging for a while, when can I let go? BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, Bill, this verse was inspired by my mouse pad that has a lime green frog with brilliant orange eyes and sticky pad toes. At the bottom it says, "Hang On THE LORD'S COMIN' BACK." So, that's when we can let go, I guess. |
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