Open Poetry #15 |
All It Could Be |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I don't know how To make you feel The realness of me And who I am What I want Whats important to me I don't know how To make you feel Secure in me The me of Us I don't know how Because it's got to come From you And will if Only you want It to I don't know how And wish I could Because until then The All of Us The me, The you Will only be What would have, if it Only could have Thank You |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Powerful realization at the end there, Connie... I guess everyone travels at their own pace and not everyone can keep up... or chooses to... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark: Thanks... : ) ~Connie~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I REALLY love this and your style of writing. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Enchantress... Thank You ever so much : ) ~Connie~ |
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