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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.

0 posted 2001-09-08 11:21 AM



I don't know how
To make you feel
The realness of me
And who I am
What I want
Whats important to me

I don't know how
To make you feel
Secure in me
The me of Us

I don't know how
Because it's got to come
From you
And will if
Only you want
It to

I don't know how
And wish I could
Because until then
The All of Us
The me, The you
Will only be
What would have, if it
Only could have

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2001-09-08 11:24 AM


Powerful realization at the end there, Connie...  I guess everyone travels at their own pace and not everyone can keep up...  or chooses to...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
2 posted 2001-09-08 12:43 PM


Mark: Thanks...  : )
  ~Connie~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-08 02:06 PM


I REALLY love this and your style of writing.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
4 posted 2001-09-08 03:06 PM


Enchantress... Thank You ever so much : )
    ~Connie~

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