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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-09-08 11:28 AM


Like most lovebirds
We both have our share of problems
Maybe a little space from eachother
Will aid us to solve them

Presently, I am confused
Asking myself If I want to stay with you?
I sit here thinking quietly
My nerves begin to throb violently

I understand your situation
but you don't seem to realize mine
Don't get me wrong, I love being near you
It's just together, we're spending too much time

Everyday we are inseperable
Practically 24 hours a day, 7 days a week
I need to remove you from my hip
So I can have my own fresh air to breathe

I hope you are not offended
Just try to understand my position
In order for me to communicate with you
You've got to listen

You act very hard
For someone whose heart is soft
but you interrupt me when I'm talking
And that tends to piss me off

So do I stay or do I leave?
Two different paths, door number 1 or 2?
I know which one you stand behind
but will I open it for you?

Are we strong enough, mature enough
To work out our issues
Or do we end it like this
left to weep with a box of tissues?

Is our love meant to be?
Is it as solid as a building?
I believe it's weak
like legos that can be reconstructed



© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2001-09-08 11:42 AM


I'm curious to hear the other's point of view...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-09-08 01:34 PM


I liked this very much......
I hope we hear how this turns out  

RSEvans
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3 posted 2001-09-08 01:39 PM


I'm with SEA...hope this all comes out better than it started...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-09-08 01:44 PM


Tell us...tell us...then what happpened?  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-09-08 01:50 PM


Doesn't have to be stay or leave....lots of other options...just give each other some breathing room...what do I know?  What's interesting is we sometimes want the opposite of what we have.  James
Zinsser
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6 posted 2001-09-08 03:17 PM


This is sad.... I have a million things I'd like to say... but say none
~Connie~

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7 posted 2002-02-08 05:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joanna, this is so so sad, I'm so sorry you had to go through this before and I hope now you feel much happier! (kiss on lips) I love you, my sweet Guinevere! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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