Open Poetry #15 |
Stay or Leave? |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Like most lovebirds We both have our share of problems Maybe a little space from eachother Will aid us to solve them Presently, I am confused Asking myself If I want to stay with you? I sit here thinking quietly My nerves begin to throb violently I understand your situation but you don't seem to realize mine Don't get me wrong, I love being near you It's just together, we're spending too much time Everyday we are inseperable Practically 24 hours a day, 7 days a week I need to remove you from my hip So I can have my own fresh air to breathe I hope you are not offended Just try to understand my position In order for me to communicate with you You've got to listen You act very hard For someone whose heart is soft but you interrupt me when I'm talking And that tends to piss me off So do I stay or do I leave? Two different paths, door number 1 or 2? I know which one you stand behind but will I open it for you? Are we strong enough, mature enough To work out our issues Or do we end it like this left to weep with a box of tissues? Is our love meant to be? Is it as solid as a building? I believe it's weak like legos that can be reconstructed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I'm curious to hear the other's point of view... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this very much...... I hope we hear how this turns out |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I'm with SEA...hope this all comes out better than it started... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tell us...tell us...then what happpened? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Doesn't have to be stay or leave....lots of other options...just give each other some breathing room...what do I know? What's interesting is we sometimes want the opposite of what we have. James |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is sad.... I have a million things I'd like to say... but say none ~Connie~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joanna, this is so so sad, I'm so sorry you had to go through this before and I hope now you feel much happier! (kiss on lips) I love you, my sweet Guinevere! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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