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Pursuit of Your Actions
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Pursuit of Your Actions |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
peering out from behind the tangles of a twisted vine, I watched your eyes dancing about, in spite of the stare of wildflowers... among the gusts of a balmy breeze, you moved ahead of your own steps, dreaming of the ocean that has cleared storms which threatened shadows over your cradle of cherish, filled with those moments you’ve collected from undergone treasures and suffered distances. moving a stray twist from my face, the blur gave me a brighter picture of you in the rain-- the drizzle of familiarly foreign mist-- embracing the dusting of solitude. as yet another dangling rope got between me and the vision of you roaming our canvas, my impatience caught your attention, and I was forced to come out from behind the veil and confess my admiring... with one finger to my lips and a hand to my waist, you drew me into a circle of incorporation to apply what I’ve observed to this endless cycle of attachment... -kh tried to write a letter to tell you how I feel, but all I kept on writing was slipping on the tears from the day... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
The business of a partnership...elloquently described. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
snowpants, stepping out is the only way someone must always take that first step, though it's often easier to hide behind the veil, one can not hide there feelings for an eternity. Awesome poem, I love the imagery used. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
embracing the dusting of solitude. as yet another dangling rope got between me and the vision of you roaming our canvas, my impatience caught your attention, and I was forced to come out from behind the veil and confess my admiring... with one finger to my lips and a hand to my waist, you drew me into a circle of incorporation to apply what I’ve observed to this endless cycle of attachment... ======================================== *smiling at the inspire* reading thru your perspective and perception always grants me a view of vision. very cool write of one finding their direction in anothers reflection. I do so enjoy seeing "him" in your words  (dont tell him it will go straight to his head) LOL excellent K jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
RSEvans: thank you...I appreciate your reply!  Rosebud: thanks so much...glad you liked it! J: and I enjoy getting inspiration from "him"...BUT, don't you worry...we wouldn't want that to happen, now would we?  thanks, girlie...I'm glad you liked this one...  sp  tried to write a letter to tell you how I feel, but all I kept on writing was slipping on the tears from the day... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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