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A Night With You
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A Night With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“A NIGHT WITH YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ A moonbeam shines in the darkness, caressing your face, with the deepest blue eyes I would ever see, brilliant as the stars, and most sanguine… They are also soft like my heart, which beats a faster pace, for you have touched me deeply, capturing all of my affection… You bathe in its brilliance, and shine in the night, and I now see your inner beauty, so breathtaking therein… I stare and gaze in wonderment, seeing you in the light, the many passions I feel, anyone would think them a sin… Aching and wanting to hold, nervous am I, asking if I might, tenderly our fingers touch, melting together, as they would do… The light upon you never dimmed, it shown through the night, an embrace made in the heavens, knowing the aurora of you… Your moonbeam enters within me, and my heart swells, with the warmth of knowing, all the things we would do… My angel has placed her hand on you, but it’s me she compels, for tenderly this is, a night together, with you… ~~~~ |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You are quite the romantic! Very beautiful poem once again! Anxiously awaiting more <3 RosePetal |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A night to savour, undoubtedly. A sensuoulsy tender description, Bill... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, If I were of the opposite sex I would say WOW |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tender and romantic as always...helen [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Every word expresses love. A beautiful and romantic poem. |
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