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How Unromantic
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How Unromantic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How Unromantic After some thought I suppose you probably broke my heart. No wonder I've been feeling so blue. Should have known it had something to do with you. Don't mind me and I'm sure you won't. Do you have any feelings for me? Looks like you don't. It's not your fault I fell in love so fast. It's not your problem I got serious at last. I can't say why right away I start thinking forever while romantically we never spend that much time together. Why must it always end this way? Will my heart survive another day? Just give me a fair chance to linger in the beauty of romance. Jameslee@July16,2001 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
painful... but very well said and done... I enjoyed the read..even if the subject is painful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . falling in love again. . . and again. . . *sigh*. . . you share it well James. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, I have walked in these same thoughts before, it's easy to want something and be thinking in terms not yet granted, and thinking of the future and being with someone is who we are, one day you will in your fullness of giving and receiving love will look back and have all of the answers to all of the why's and this next statement tells me that you are truly a loving person and I wish you the very best. "Just give me a fair chance to linger in the beauty of romance" Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, I also have a tendency of falling to fast. And I know it hurts. You have such a loving heart.. its a shame to see it broken. I have to say I loveee the last two lines. So well put. "Just give me a fair chance to linger in the beauty of romance" Love it love it  Good write.TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah James, I know just this feeling. We romantics just want it to be real, and beautiful, and as we dreamed. And these dense other ones just don't get it. Sigh.. Lovely poem, too. Sandra |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Some have passion's thirst, could be worse. Someone must fall first, good verse. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Time ... that is the answer. Hang in there guy |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ah but James, someday you will linger in the beauty of romance, you just wait dear. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Memories can't be taken away. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It's so good to be loved, but some people don't appreciate love. Great poem! |
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